Wednesday, January 9, 2008

Saath
Duniya mein Saare log ek dosere se shayadIse philosphey se jore hai.

Saath
Rohe Ko.. Zism Ka…..

Zism Ko..Jaan Ka……

Jaan Ko..Dil Ka……..

Dil Ko..Man Ka……Saath ChaHiye

Aur Man Ko ??????
Ek Aur man Ka……
.Saaath ChaHiye……

6 comments:

NeeRaj said...

humm kafi achhi hai ..
par agar vo sath na mile to ..
???

ilesh said...
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ilesh said...

Bahot kuchh keh gai aap...Man ko Man ka sath chahiye....superb ....

रश्मि प्रभा said...

mann se mann tak ka safar hi sahi hai,is darshan ko kis tarah do shabdon ki dhuri me baandha hai,
bahut achhi lagi aur mann tak le aai

Vijay Kumar Sappatti said...

Archana ji ,

pahli baar aapke blog par aaya hoon , aur aapki umda rachnayen padh raha hoon . bahut accha likhti hai , badhai sweekare karen ..

kabhi samay mile to mere poem blog par bhi aayiyenga .

dhanyawad


vijay
www.poemsofvijay.blogspot.com

Babli said...

पहले तो मैं आपका तहे दिल से शुक्रियादा करना चाहती हूँ की आपको मेरी शायरी और पेंटिंग पसंद आई! आपके सुंदर कमेन्ट के लिए धन्यवाद !
बहुत खूब लिखा है आपने !